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Offline Flux

Pirates of Alpha Centauri - Comments
« on: October 04, 2014, 03:56:48 AM »
I'd rather not have my fanfic thread all clogged up, so feel free to give feedback here.
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Offline JarlWolf

Re: Pirates of Alpha Centauri - Comments
« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2014, 08:07:12 AM »
Seems like a AAR, just more so with pure literature then with imagery- which is fine. I found it interesting but I am a little confused as to how Zakharov's pod was taken over, and I'd also like to see more details on the interactions between the leaders and more potential story on that front.

Otherwise it is fine read, I just think it needs more specific details..
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