Alpha Centauri 2

Community => Planet Tales => Topic started by: Rymdolov on November 03, 2012, 08:56:13 PM

Title: Comments for War Crimes: Gaians at War
Post by: Rymdolov on November 03, 2012, 08:56:13 PM

Comments and questions on the War Crimes II (http://alphacentauri2.info/index.php?topic=2546.0) story can be left in this thread.   :)

Title: Re: Comments for War Crimes: Gaians at War
Post by: Buster's Uncle on November 03, 2012, 09:13:22 PM

I'l repeat somewhat for the benefit of onlookers, because you deserve public praise and not just private, that this is one of the very finest stories ever to come out of the GotM team - and the others were written by native speakers of English and had more help from each other. 

Very impressive - nuanced, smart, storytelling.  You gave us a Deirdre who rang true.  You made the fate of minor character Alexander an effective moment.  And - I just reread the ending, and my eyes are literally still moist as I write this, ten minutes later.  That takes a masterfull ending to a story I've been over so many times, going back two years now.  I am in AWE of your talent, sir.

Title: Re: Comments for War Crimes: Gaians at War
Post by: JarlWolf on July 19, 2013, 04:52:02 PM

I generally liked it. You knew how to switch the mood and tone of the story as well in a very quick pace, and it really puts some perspective for both factions to imagine how their society is like to extents.

Title: Re: Comments for War Crimes: Gaians at War
Post by: Buster's Uncle on July 19, 2013, 04:59:28 PM

Yes; it's very effective world creation.   I believed in these Gaians.

Title: Re: Comments for War Crimes: Gaians at War
Post by: SenniTreborius on October 07, 2014, 01:58:06 PM

Like this.

Title: Re: Comments for War Crimes: Gaians at War
Post by: Rymdolov on October 08, 2014, 11:34:26 AM

Thanks for all the kind words!  :-[